Asking for help about poetry

roublardise:

Hello my dears!
I need some help, actually. I have written a poem, and I need some nice english speaker who could read it and tell me if it’s english. And if it’s pretty, because for my french ears it is, but idk if it still is for English. I would like to know if I have well count my syllables too.
I have taken a big challenge by writing poetry in my second language besides I don’t really know the different rules and all. I’d really love to make something at least good. That’s why I’m asking for help.
My poem is about being genderqueer, mostly confusing about its gender identity. So if this subject make you mad weeeell don’t answer.
Thank you <3

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